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This book made me sign up just so I could leave my thoughts. Pick it up, find a comfy place to settle down and enjoy the journey. Only one poor comment - update already.... I have already read it twice from start to finish just to keep the feeling alive.
I don't know why this story has a gender bender tag, I might suggest a horror tag though.
The story and characters are well developed, and I enjoyed the writing. The romance between Xion and Darius starts off kind of a slow burn, but their relationship is consistent once settled. The storytelling caused me to feel anxious, horrified, in love, surprise and silly at times. I didn't love how it ended a bit abruptly, but I'll be re-reading this one.
The story and characters are well developed, and I enjoyed the writing. The romance between Xion and Darius starts off kind of a slow burn, but their relationship is consistent once settled. The storytelling caused me to feel anxious, horrified, in love, surprise and silly at times. I didn't love how it ended a bit abruptly, but I'll be re-reading this one.
Loved it! cant wait for more of the anime as well. if the manga keeps going that would be awesome too!
I have no complaints about the writing and writing style, and the and pacing is steady. The characters were consistent, and the storyline flows and makes sense.
I also really liked how the idea of fated mates here is slightly different than the usual (at least the others I have read.)
I also really liked how the idea of fated mates here is slightly different than the usual (at least the others I have read.)
Chapter 1: "Instance Name: Blo*** Restaurant"
"Instance Type: Novice Trial"
"Instance Player Count: Solo"
"Objective: Survive 72 hours"
72 HOURS. And yet, well over 80 chapters and 3 in story days later the MC still hasn't cleared the novice he** difficulty instance mission and still seems to be planning for an unknown extended days to survive like the author completely forgot that this arc was supposed to be a timed survival mission instead of an investigation quest line story arc as the author pours more and more world building into the Blo*** Restaurant world. Like the extended world building of a reincarnation story meets a half-baked mentality of a quick transmigrator's belief in the strength of their system. And of course the system basically never pops up again except tangentially as status prompts or iffy item descriptions. And judging by the chapter names, the MC still hasn't left the Blo*** Restaurant Arc even after over a 1000 chapters
The cover/title are a lie/misleading since the MC becomes a delivery guy instead of a butcher like the cover smock implies and basically lost his human form day 1, got turned into a regen tentacle arms monster
TL;DR: It's like the frustration of starting a fantasy anime with the summary being watch the journey of the greatest Archmage and the first episode being the MC stating that Magic School is starting soon and that the MC should hurry to make the journey in time for the "short deadline". Then season 1 ends with the MC still on the road after x amount of side quests and only occasionally still thinking about how far the MC still has to go to get to the school while completely ignoring the deadline setting from episode 1
"Instance Type: Novice Trial"
"Instance Player Count: Solo"
"Objective: Survive 72 hours"
72 HOURS. And yet, well over 80 chapters and 3 in story days later the MC still hasn't cleared the novice he** difficulty instance mission and still seems to be planning for an unknown extended days to survive like the author completely forgot that this arc was supposed to be a timed survival mission instead of an investigation quest line story arc as the author pours more and more world building into the Blo*** Restaurant world. Like the extended world building of a reincarnation story meets a half-baked mentality of a quick transmigrator's belief in the strength of their system. And of course the system basically never pops up again except tangentially as status prompts or iffy item descriptions. And judging by the chapter names, the MC still hasn't left the Blo*** Restaurant Arc even after over a 1000 chapters
The cover/title are a lie/misleading since the MC becomes a delivery guy instead of a butcher like the cover smock implies and basically lost his human form day 1, got turned into a regen tentacle arms monster
TL;DR: It's like the frustration of starting a fantasy anime with the summary being watch the journey of the greatest Archmage and the first episode being the MC stating that Magic School is starting soon and that the MC should hurry to make the journey in time for the "short deadline". Then season 1 ends with the MC still on the road after x amount of side quests and only occasionally still thinking about how far the MC still has to go to get to the school while completely ignoring the deadline setting from episode 1
Sem nexo nenhum
Do nada um torneio
Do nada a irmã do prota aparece no torneio e já conhecendo uma doida que ele falou 2x no jogo e já chama de cunhada
Do nada um torneio
Do nada a irmã do prota aparece no torneio e já conhecendo uma doida que ele falou 2x no jogo e já chama de cunhada
Honestly, one of the best story oat, book and ebook coufound
Novels are not my cup of tea, but wait the next chapter of the webtoon adaptation is poison
Pretty good so far, I like the world building and the physics incorporated magic ideas also recovering memories is pretty cool, a lot of other things to but I don't want to say spoilers
Storyline really had potential. Unfortunately the lack of properly developed characters and story and super rushed pacing took away from a relatively unique concept.
So far it's like an omegaverse x wolf pack Romeo and Juliet story, with more drama and some pretty evil characters.
I'm not dropping it because I really want to know what happens.
So far it's like an omegaverse x wolf pack Romeo and Juliet story, with more drama and some pretty evil characters.
I'm not dropping it because I really want to know what happens.
I have some questions regarding this scene from your story:
"Tears streamed down his snout like waterfalls. "Brother! Oh, my poor brother! You died so miserably!"
1. When Leonidas cried, did his tears stream all the way to the end of his snout and onto the tip of his nose?
2. Exactly how would Leonidas react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears streaming down his snout with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Leonidas' snout.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Leonidas' tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his snout?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears streaming down Leonidas' snout?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
"Tears streamed down his snout like waterfalls. "Brother! Oh, my poor brother! You died so miserably!"
1. When Leonidas cried, did his tears stream all the way to the end of his snout and onto the tip of his nose?
2. Exactly how would Leonidas react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears streaming down his snout with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Leonidas' snout.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Leonidas' tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his snout?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears streaming down Leonidas' snout?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!

